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If I Did Not Love You

A poem for every parent. If I didn’t love you, would I say I care? Would it matter where you going or what you have to wear? If I didn’t love you, would I want to hear? Everything you did today while I hold you near. If I didn’t love you, would I ever say? “Come let’s kneel down and thank our Lord for yet another day.” If I didn’t love you, would I say goodnight? Would I tuck you in your bed before switching off the light? If I didn’t love you, when you feeling ill. Would I take your temperature while you suffering with the chill? If I didn’t love you, would I stick around? Listen to your cruel insults, fighting on this battleground. If I didn’t love you, would I let you go? Praying that you’ll see the light and know I love you so.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/15/2016 2:41:00 PM
Your rhymes indeed are spot on!!! Congrats Louis, for having your poem featured in the Poetet Soup homepage!!! ;-)
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Louis Venter
Date: 7/16/2016 6:28:00 AM
Thanks Teddy.
Date: 7/4/2016 11:10:00 PM
Louis:), Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I know you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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Louis Venter
Date: 7/5/2016 4:41:00 AM
Thanks SKAT A.
Date: 7/3/2016 8:12:00 PM
Louis,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Louis Venter
Date: 7/5/2016 4:45:00 AM
Thanks Linda.

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