If I Could Talk To God?

If I Could Talk To God?

Well of course I can
I love you Father
Maybe more than my heart shows

When I sit and think about how you love me
How you’ve blessed me with two of the most
Wonderful boys. 
I feel how much you love me

You know how much I like to share 
So you’ve given me a home with a door that
Swings wide enough to welcome everyone in
And I feel how much you love me

As I ride on a country road and see a crisp blue
Sky with the whitest wisps of clouds painted in
Resting on the multi colored autumn leaves
My joy permeates every part of my being
And I feel how much you love me

When I sit on the fence 
And hear the breeze whispering through the trees
The whippoorwill’s song
And the laughter coming from somewhere inside the house
I know how much you love me

God do you know how much I love you
Can I ever show you the way I feel
So perfectly flawed
So needing grace
And yet one day 
I will see the glory of your face
And know how much you love me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Wilson Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 2:54 PM
Laurie you lefta loverly comment on my poem wonderful in 2009 it is a song and I have put it on YouTube called its wonderful to know by Leon Wilson It goes well with your poem God bless.
K. Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 9:57 AM
This is truly uplifting, Laurie :) I am guilty of neglecting to see the beauty and love of God but reading this is such a beautiful reminder, Laurie-- how wonderful it is to read poetry that inspires-- love how you see God in everything :) Thank you-- nikko :)
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February 4, 2010 at 8:33 AM
Dear Sis, YOU are a Blessing the Heartfelt LOVE in YOUR Words I can see GOD sitting Beside YOU on the fence Such Vivid Imagery YOU still have that Laureatus Style I fell in LOVE with LOVE YOU ALWAYS YOUR Brother... Harry
Bingham Avatar
December 30, 2009 at 8:34 PM
Hi, My friend! Just want to wish you and yours a wonderful and Blessed New Year. Ron
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November 17, 2009 at 12:47 PM
What an uplifting outlook on life. Nice use of imagery. Blessings to you for sharing this inspirational poem with us. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a wonderful day!! Karen
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November 16, 2009 at 4:57 PM
Laurie, it's wonderful to see you posting! This should place highly in the contest, in my opinion! Beautiful tribute. By the way, I wholeheartedly agree with the first verse, especially! Hugs, Donna
Bingham Avatar
November 15, 2009 at 7:48 PM
So good seeing you posting again, glad I caught it. This s a wonderful prayer straight from your heart and filled with love. I think your last verse pretty much describes us all. God Bless my friend. Ron
Wilson Avatar
November 15, 2009 at 3:04 PM
A poem from the heart Laurie. Before a word leaves your lips God knows what you are going to say so yes He knows how much you love Him. But God still loves that intimate time when you do say how I love you so. God Bless. Leon
Kelly Avatar
November 15, 2009 at 11:59 AM
Amen . This was a reading , from the Book Of Ginn 12.15.09 .... Welcome back ....
Richards Avatar
November 15, 2009 at 7:41 AM
WELCOME BACK MY FRIEND! Oh my goodness....I've missed seeing your name among the poetry....and reading this, I remember why you had the power to move me to tears. Please continue to post when you can...this is so wonderful to read.... your words are heartfelt, as are you! Beautiful dear girl!! :)
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