If I Could Paint Your Picture

I tried to paint a picture, Dear, of you, But there was no right color that would do. There is no blue that ever could display The tranquilness with which you face each day. I think no shade of red I’ll ever find To match the utter passion of your mind. Among sweet sunny yellow’s many hues, I cannot find a one that I might use. No color in this world can paint you whole. And certainly I could not paint your soul. The soul of you, so beautiful to me, I know that it will shine eternally. From inside out, my darling, how you glow. Such happiness I’d never thought to know. But never could I paint that brilliant light. Nor can I paint your beauty in my sight. If I could be Van Gogh, I think I might Create a picture of a starry night. And I would put inside it me and you Enraptured ever in that sky’s dark blue. Written April 1, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Godwin Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 6:07 PM
Blew me away in the best poetic way. I know I'm being redundant, but it is absolute 'treasure poetry' I have been gifted with from your list. LOVE CayCay
Johnson Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 3:59 PM
This is lovely Andrea. congratulations on your placement. Love, joyce
Selfa Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 9:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on winning the MAY DAY PREMIER contest!!! I hope to see more of your poems in the future for I truly enjoy your works. Keep up the good work :) -HANS
A   Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 10:46 PM
Andrea, Congrats on your fine couplet win. LINDA
Lawless Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 7:09 AM
Hey Andrea, way to go - glad I got to see this one. Really like the use of the colors to correlate with the feelings.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 3:17 PM
I remember loving this one Andrea. Congratulations on your number one spot my friend. #7 ; )
Mcclain Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 7:26 PM
Hi Andrea, Wonderful cadence, and brilliant metaphor of colors for personal traits. Congrats on your impressive win! Cheers, Brian
Smith Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 3:22 PM
Lovely win Andrea, congratulations...
Palli Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 1:29 PM
Love the use of color! Nice love poem. Congrats
Allison Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 1:03 PM
Very romantic Andrea and you were inspired by a lovely song:-) hugs Jan xx
Pennell  Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 11:45 AM
superb as always congrats on your win stephen
Scars Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 8:47 AM
Andrea, this is outstanding, all I can say...thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your top placement :)-luloo
Babcock Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 11:47 AM
Ah this is beautiful Andrea. love phyl
Duncan Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 3:09 AM
Well I love this. I'm thinking it is a winner ;)
Horne Avatar
April 12, 2014 at 3:22 PM
awww, sure winner here, my friend : )
Sirak Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 7:34 AM
Now this is imaginative, creative and beautiful. I think it is a winner!
Merrill Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 1:11 AM
Hi Andrea. Nice poem--great imagery. Nicely written--poignant, but not gushy. If by Bread? What a cool song. David Gates is awesome! Thanks for your heart-felt words, :) Mel
A  Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 6:15 PM
AWESOME......SKAT
Walker  Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 5:59 PM
Well done Andrea... Verlena
Richards Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 11:59 AM
I love the "artistic" twist and the way you formed this poem into a piece of beauty! Well done, Andrea.....congrats on your win!
Carrillo Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 11:07 AM
Andrea; Congrats. on your win. I don't know why, but with this poem you brought tears to my eyes. I think you painted it rather well, from the depth of your soul. Thanks for sharing such beautiful piece. ... Lucilla... Check your e-mal later
Callus Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 9:58 AM
Hi Andrea...just popping back again to congratulate you on your worthy win :) // paul
Ink-U-Script Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 7:42 AM
Congrats Andrea on your deserved win...love the last line...it's something about it that took me to another place. ..beautifully written! !!! :)
Oyewole Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 1:45 AM
A brilliant write! Big congrats on your accolade!!
Gasun Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 11:42 PM
This is extremely amazing! Congratulations on your well-deserved great win my dearest friend Andrea . I like your poem so much! Thank u so much for sharing! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
12
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace