If I Could I Would Fetch You the Moon on A Spoon

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3/8/2025 11.20pm The Moon and The Spoon. Let's shine with everything bright | by Trinh Do | Medium

If I could I would fetch you the moon on a spoon As easy as scooping an ice cream into your cone Everything I’ll do for you is as light as any balloon For I’m deeply in love with you You’re my strength, my world, my greatest inspiration. If I could I would fetch you the moon on a spoon With the planets making layered ice cream scoops in your cone I'll also pick all the stars while singing you my love song And make them precious garlands, just all for you, They’re diamonds from my heart where yours belong.

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/9/2025 6:08:00 PM

Diamonds of the heart now that is really pretty, loved your poem, thank you for sharing.

Len Gasun
Date: 3/12/2025 12:47:00 AM

Thank you for coming by, sharing your precious time to read my poem and your uplifting/encouraging words my dear poet friend M.Rose. God bless you always and your poetry. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2025 3:22:00 PM

Oh you did so well with this one. Really cute poem, Len.

Len Gasun
Date: 3/12/2025 12:46:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words my ddear poet friend Andrea. God bless you always and your poetry. Hugs

Lin Lane

Date: 3/8/2025 9:45:00 AM

What an adorable take on the theme, Len. I found myself singing 'You're the Inspiration'... Peter Citera~Chicago: "Always on my mind, you're in my heart, in my soul." A man who offers the moon and a scoop of ice cream? Yes!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/8/2025 6:05:00 PM

I hope you feel better soon, Len. ;-)

Len Gasun
Date: 3/8/2025 5:58:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting wrods my dear poet friend Lin. Yes, sort of. I suppose to write another stanza last night but I was in a hurry to go to bed, still recovering from flu. Again, tyvm for coming by. God bless you always and your poetry. Hugs