If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon

Love takes one's breath away, making the heart flutter like a butterfly. I have given you the diamond stars, from above in the nightly sky. If only I could fetch the moon, I would give it to you in a huge spoon.
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Gasun Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 8:41 PM
A brilliant and sweet write my dearest poet friend Paula! I love it a lot and enjoyed immensely. Congratulations on your win! Cheers and hugs! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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March 18, 2025 at 3:52 PM
Thank You for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my "If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon" to be, A brilliant and sweet write. It was fun to bring to life. God Bless. Hugs... May your nights be filled with diamond stars as you write away.............
Rose  Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 3:39 PM
The bigger the love the bigger the spoon dear Paula, loved your poem, its most endearing to my heart Congrats on your win, xo
Goldsmith Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 3:49 PM
Thank You for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you love my "If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon" write. You are so right. The bigger the love the bigger the spoon. Hooray!!! May your nights be filled with diamond stars as you write away.............
mysore Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 6:54 PM
oh my! amazing dear friend. congratulations on your win. cheers. Happy writing dear poet!!!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 10:35 AM
Thank You for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my "If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon" to be, amazing. WOW!!! Thanks... You put a smile on my heart. Cheers To You... May your nights be filled with diamond stars as you write away.............
Goldsmith Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 10:57 AM
"7 Place" If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon~Written:3/3/2025~Written By Human Poet....
Canerdy Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 3:34 PM
Very appealing and concise, Paula. Janice
Goldsmith Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 1:47 PM
Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you enjoyed my "If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon" write. It was fun to write. May your nights be filled with diamond stars as you write away.............
Tor Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 11:39 AM
So sweet Paula. He is very lucky to have you.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 12:25 PM
Thank You for reading, writing. Glad you found my "If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon" to be, So sweet. This one was fun to write. May your nights be filled with diamond stars as you write away.............
Mckeithan Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 6:38 PM
Wonderful write Paula. Love does that to us all.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 8:15 AM
Thank You for reading, writing. Glad you found my "If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon" to be a, Wonderful write. Yes, love can make one a little crazy. May your nights be filled with diamond stars as you write away.............
Andresen Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 10:43 AM
- A sweet poem, Paula...love the last line :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 1:43 PM
Thank You for reading, writing and for Best wishes in the contest. Glad you found my "If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon" to be, A sweet poem. So glad you love the last line. Hugs... May your nights be filled with diamond stars as you write away.............
Proxenos Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 10:39 AM
I love love this short poem, for when you truly love someone you would really go fetch the moon for them, Well penned Paula.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 1:41 PM
Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you love my "If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon" write. Yes, love would go fetch the moon for them. May your nights be filled with diamond stars as you write away.............
Goldsmith Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 9:24 AM
If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon~Written:3/3/2025~Written By Human Poet....
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