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If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon

Love takes one's breath away, making the heart flutter like a butterfly. I have given you the diamond stars, from above in the nightly sky. If only I could fetch the moon, I would give it to you in a huge spoon.

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Len Gasun

Date: 3/17/2025 8:41:00 PM

A brilliant and sweet write my dearest poet friend Paula! I love it a lot and enjoyed immensely. Congratulations on your win! Cheers and hugs! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/18/2025 3:52:00 PM

Thank You for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my "If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon" to be, A brilliant and sweet write. It was fun to bring to life. God Bless. Hugs... May your nights be filled with diamond stars as you write away.............

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/15/2025 3:39:00 PM

The bigger the love the bigger the spoon dear Paula, loved your poem, its most endearing to my heart Congrats on your win, xo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/18/2025 3:49:00 PM

Thank You for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you love my "If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon" write. You are so right. The bigger the love the bigger the spoon. Hooray!!! May your nights be filled with diamond stars as you write away.............

thriveni c mysore

Date: 3/14/2025 6:54:00 PM

oh my! amazing dear friend. congratulations on your win. cheers. Happy writing dear poet!!!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/15/2025 10:35:00 AM

Thank You for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my "If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon" to be, amazing. WOW!!! Thanks... You put a smile on my heart. Cheers To You... May your nights be filled with diamond stars as you write away.............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/14/2025 10:57:00 AM

"7 Place" If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon~Written:3/3/2025~Written By Human Poet....

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/7/2025 3:34:00 PM

Very appealing and concise, Paula. Janice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2025 1:47:00 PM

Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you enjoyed my "If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon" write. It was fun to write. May your nights be filled with diamond stars as you write away.............

Michael Tor

Date: 3/4/2025 11:39:00 AM

So sweet Paula. He is very lucky to have you.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/5/2025 12:25:00 PM

Thank You for reading, writing. Glad you found my "If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon" to be, So sweet. This one was fun to write. May your nights be filled with diamond stars as you write away.............

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 3/3/2025 6:38:00 PM

Wonderful write Paula. Love does that to us all.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/4/2025 8:15:00 AM

Thank You for reading, writing. Glad you found my "If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon" to be a, Wonderful write. Yes, love can make one a little crazy. May your nights be filled with diamond stars as you write away.............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/3/2025 10:43:00 AM

- A sweet poem, Paula...love the last line :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/3/2025 1:43:00 PM

Thank You for reading, writing and for Best wishes in the contest. Glad you found my "If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon" to be, A sweet poem. So glad you love the last line. Hugs... May your nights be filled with diamond stars as you write away.............

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/3/2025 10:39:00 AM

I love love this short poem, for when you truly love someone you would really go fetch the moon for them, Well penned Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/3/2025 1:41:00 PM

Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you love my "If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon" write. Yes, love would go fetch the moon for them. May your nights be filled with diamond stars as you write away.............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/3/2025 9:24:00 AM

If I Could I Would Fetch You The Moon~Written:3/3/2025~Written By Human Poet....