Neena Luke Poet I do not know?

If I Could Change the World

If I could change the world
There would be peace on earth 
Every child would know their father 
All the marriages would work
If I could change the world
The only season would be spring
No children would be aborted
And all the blind would see
If Icould change the world
Homlessness would not exist
There would be no more starvation 
The government would see to this
If I could change the world 
We would sing a joyful song
Rejoicing for unity among the nations
Even the birds would sing along

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Charmaine Chircop November 23, 2009 at 3:35 PM Welcome to poetry soup..excellent work indeed with a deep message--Charma

Carol Sunshine Brown November 23, 2009 at 8:54 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Luke. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Simone Segal November 22, 2009 at 2:19 PM If I could change the world, I would make everybody think like you, which in my poetry I try to do!!!!!! Great poem! love Simone

John Freeman November 22, 2009 at 8:03 AM Beautiful sentiments here Neena. There is coming a time that will be perfect peice in the earth, Sincerely, Love, moses

Sara Kendrick November 21, 2009 at 4:25 PM We here at soup are in agreement with this and give you a hardy welcome. Nicely done on this topic and I am looking forward to reading many more. Sara

Robert A. Dufresne November 21, 2009 at 7:06 AM Yes Neena, That must be the Heaven we are looking and hoping and working for as best as we can. Veery nice poem. Thanks- Robert