If I Could Change the Past

Ah, someone will give me a magic key
With which I could change my past
This is a good opportunity for me
To daydream what I could have cast

I would have learnt to read more books 
Faces lonely and mellow
Exploring the dark silhouette looks
Inside the letterbox pale yellow

I would have opened my cage much more
To accommodate more lovely birds
So that the psyche could heal more sore
And could utter more melodious words 

I would have courted the ever flowing river
That I have been somehow afraid to hug
By refusing the ingrained fears
That clouded my judgment like a drug

I would have tried to understand you better
To listen to rains with more perception
Would have loved your torrential laughter
Along with the tears without inhibition

Some closed doors I did open
Would have liked to try a few more 
Some beautiful heartbeats I did listen
Some more I crave in your core
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July 27, 2016
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Duet Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 9:30 PM
I like this one. It seems an honest representation on your feelings.
Gupta Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 9:51 PM
Thank you ... what seems blue may be black too...
Scott Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 9:45 AM
Beautiful write. Soft and beautiful. I heard the whisper. Congrats!!!
Gupta Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 9:56 PM
What a comment ... me encanta ... thank u ....
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 1:23 PM
Congrats on your win. Very beautifully composed. :) Sunita
Gupta Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 1:04 AM
Thank you ...
Dutta Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 9:51 PM
Congrats to win
Gupta Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 4:52 AM
Thank you ...
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 7:44 PM
There are many beautiful images of things here you would do. Congratulations
Gupta Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 9:14 PM
Thank you Janis ...
Negron Flores Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 4:01 PM
Congratulations Probir on the placement of the contest
Gupta Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 9:14 PM
Thank you so much ...
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 1:32 AM
wow, I LOVE yours. The ones going on and on about world peace are boring to me. THIS has substance because it's about YOU. Love it.
Gupta Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 5:23 AM
May be impersonal too... But that is immaterial ... what gladdens is that you like it ... thank you ...
Turner Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 8:54 AM
For those of us with more yesterdays than tomorrows, our memories are our refuge in this ever changing world. I'm not sure I would change anything but it's certainly nice to dream. Love the write Probir.
Gupta Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 5:24 AM
Thank you ...
Smith Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 8:00 AM
Very lovely Probir ...I would love to go back and change some things as well.
Gupta Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 5:26 AM
Thank you ... Then the poem fulfills another unknown aim too ...
Trifiatis Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 7:57 AM
Oh yes, you can change the past my dear, Probir just by changing...the future, since it soon will become... past!!! Lovely conception and writing. A seven!
Gupta Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 5:26 AM
Thank you ...
Warrior Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 7:28 AM
Superbly done Probir...I wish we all had that key...god bless...^WW^
Gupta Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 5:27 AM
Thank you ...
Kent Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 6:41 AM
It would be nice to have such a key, great write.
Gupta Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 5:28 AM
Thank you ...
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