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If I Could Capture Sunshine

If I Could Capture Sunshine



If I could capture sunshine
I would plant it in my heart
and nourish it with gentle love and care.

I would let it grow forever
like a forest it would fill me
and devour all the darkness that lies there.

If I could capture sunshine
I would gather up the rays
and hold aloft some of the radiant beams.

Shining like a golden beacon
they would lead me to the water
flowing in the crystal river of my dreams.

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire March 29, 2009 at 12:02 PM Dear Robin, Belated Congratulations on this Fantastic Featured POEM. The last stanza Wow "the crystal river of my dreams" I would like to follow that river, those dreams Superb Write ALWAYS...HG

Debbie Guzzi February 12, 2009 at 8:17 PM "and hold aloft the many radiant beams" flows better hon, (any 2 slylable word where many is will do) Add a slylable to Like a (x) golden beacon" Another very good verse. Light & Love Debbie

Belinda Parish February 11, 2009 at 3:49 PM This is a beautiful little write. I loved it!

Tyesha Ehigiator January 22, 2009 at 2:34 PM Wow, you captured sunshine beautifully..Fantastic write.Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week..God Bless *Tyesha

Vince Suzadail Jr. January 22, 2009 at 11:53 AM Apparently you do capture sunshine with your poetry. Congratulations Robin, on being featured this week. Vince

Michael Jordan January 22, 2009 at 9:29 AM Robin - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ

Carrie Richards January 19, 2009 at 5:43 PM A beautiful poem, Robin. You do have sunshine in your heart! ~ Congratulation ..well deserving to be featured! ~ Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown January 19, 2009 at 11:15 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Robin. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Sharon Winter January 19, 2009 at 9:08 AM Congratulations Robin on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar

Brian Strand January 18, 2009 at 11:41 PM Congrats on your feature this week Robin.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno December 11, 2008 at 2:38 AM I thought that was all of them, but I found one more. I read them all in a single sitting. Thanks for your time with me, I loved it and enjoyed it. Hope to read more and I'll try my hardest not to skip any...Raul

John Rhinem December 9, 2008 at 5:55 PM Yes, But "Christ Shed His Precious Blood For All Your Sins Beautiful Robin!"~So, Don't 'Ever' Forget That Dear Lady!~"My Love To You Always, John!"~"Loved Your Story About Your Blessed Family!"~"Sweet Dreams Precious Robin, Bye!:)

Nigel Fawcett November 23, 2008 at 8:26 AM I love the way this picks up its cue from your previous poem. Great write. Love, Nigel

Keith Bickerstaffe November 16, 2008 at 1:31 PM Hi Robin! This flows so smoothly... nice metrical construction, subtle rhyming and super imagery! Best wishes, Keith