Joe Flach Poet Rhyme

If I Can'T Die While Making Love

If I can’t die while making love
I want my last breath taken in the hot tub
If I can’t pass on in love’s embrace
I want to meet my maker with steam on my face

If I can’t perish with you on top
I want the hot water bubbling when my heart stops
If I can’t kick the bucket while fool’n around
I want the Jacuzzi humming to be my last sound

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Ralph Sergi January 14, 2014 at 2:41 PM Hi Joe: Thanks for the comment on La Muerta. Maybe I'd rather go in a hot tub.

Pam Woolford December 29, 2013 at 12:44 AM What a great way to go in a Jacuzzi.. Another good write Joe Please feel free to visit me some time. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas and wish you all the best for 2014. Pam x

Kathryn Collins December 24, 2013 at 12:43 PM You are incorrigible Mr. Flach. I'm dropping dead into a empty hot fudge sundae dish. Happy Christmas (right?) love, Kathy

Ralph Sergi December 19, 2013 at 11:42 AM Hi Joe: So a jacuzzi is your second love. great write. I also enjoyed the Ann Landers poem. There's nothing like your first love, despite Ann Landers' advice

Poet. Undertaker December 18, 2013 at 10:57 PM By saying "perish with you on top" you mean one should kill the thirst.Also you would never compromise on this issue. Its great Joe.Who could question our policy? I really appreciate your daring.Great write.(: ) Jenish.

David Fisher December 18, 2013 at 7:39 PM There's good logic and humor in your poem for sure. Either way you go, you win.

Chuck Melugin December 18, 2013 at 7:37 PM U want a smile on your face eh mate?. good Write! chuck

Chris Boskovski December 18, 2013 at 2:35 PM WOW!!! John my goodness what a poem! Very cleverly written my friend. I am glad I stopped by to discover your work! A very brilliant written piece you have here. you can guarantee that I will be back to read some more! Feel free to come pay me a visit anytime! Until the next comment on the next poem my friend! Great write.

Andrea Dietrich December 17, 2013 at 4:00 PM hahaha, so now I know what is first place for your favorite things and what takes second. I like food and movies, sex is a bit behind them. hahaha.