If I Call You Beautiful

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If I call you beautiful…

Do flowers bloom within your worried eyes
surrounding you with color, with thoughts
Looking past the mirror to that place you have been,
that you long to be again

Do you bite your lip,
looking within, seeking past the darkness,
subconsciously smoothing the ruffles of your dress, 
shuffling your feet a bit

Do memories flood your mind
of days before lipstick and eye shadow,
when cute was as common as wrinkled nose smiles,
playing inside or out were your choices

Do you roll your eyes and sigh,
describing a portrait that only you can see,
a mirage of impressions you have collected,
stored away in that file you reach for regularly

Do you brand me blind or crazy at least,
point to that one tiny blemish you know of,
turn and walk away kicking dust as you go,
shutting the door in disbelief

Or do you see your reflection in my eyes
the woman that you are to me, 
hear the affection in my voice, the truth
and wrinkle your nose once more and say, “I love you”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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November 14, 2019 at 1:41 PM
I hope she can see past darkness..I hope she can see herself as she was back then..years ago..I hope She sees that reflection in your eyes which says it all.How wonderful it is when someone who cares for us .remind us how special we are,and even more beautiful when our thoughts about the one we think fondly of are mutual.Such a beautiful poem Chris.
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November 14, 2019 at 1:46 PM
Thank you my friend. I truly do appreciate the kindness you have always shown to me. You are a very good friend and I miss reading your beautiful poetry. When will we see something new? Soup is just not the same without you.
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November 9, 2019 at 9:58 AM
Such a beautiful poem elegantly expressed, Chris. Your romantic style evolves ever so gracefully. Pure poetry. Love and more love always.
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November 11, 2019 at 8:16 AM
Thanks so much my friend. I appreciate your visit today
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November 8, 2019 at 4:31 PM
It ALWAYS helps when the one you love sees you as beautiful! Love it!
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November 8, 2019 at 4:44 PM
Thanks so much my friend. Smiling here. :)
Sands Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 1:46 PM
Oh Wow, I love this and can identify with things in it too! I really enjoyed this one Chris. I would definetly return those words to a man like that, even so :)
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November 8, 2019 at 2:52 PM
Thank you my friend. I always smile when you come to visit. Your kindness is always a precious gift to me.
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November 8, 2019 at 1:39 PM
- If you were the man of my life ... I would love you even more ... really beautiful and romantic, Chris :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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November 8, 2019 at 2:51 PM
What a nice thing to say. Thank you Anne-Lise. You are always so kind to me and I can't thank you enough
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November 8, 2019 at 12:46 PM
This is gorgeous and made me ponder many thoughts ... many woman would love a man to tell them they are beautiful if it’s their man .. perhaps there would be times when they felt less beautiful but to me there is nothing more romantic then your man reminding you when you doubt it in your own mind. I love this one my friend ... beautiful words beautiful soul .... :) hugs
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November 8, 2019 at 2:50 PM
Thank you Sandy. Your nice comments always humble me. I appreciate you so much my friend.
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