Vince Suzadail Jr. Poet Rhyme

If I Become a Liberal

If I become a liberal will I create a society dependent
Will I step on a rape victim just to protect the defendant
Will I raise taxes to make the working man pay
Then take Social Security and give it away
Will I help our congress create a country of fear
Will I have my head up my butt so far I can’t hear
Will I seek total dependency across the nation
Giving out welfare checks instead of education
Will I smile discreetly and tell you that I’m on your side
Then take away your incentive and take away your pride
Will I spend your money freely in any way that will suit me
If I become a liberal, will somebody please shoot me.

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Deneen White September 16, 2008 at 3:37 PM how right you are Vince, and it's going to take more than mere mortals, to make the changes that this world so desperately needs, man cannot change the hearts of others, they can not make them be less selfish, or conninving, or greedy, I could go on and on, the sad thing is, is that this write is so truthful, great one Vince, and thank you take care Deneen

Fathima Dawood September 16, 2008 at 3:22 AM So right you are!! They must start out as human before they evolve into money eating slanderers!!! They must have had hearts before they became mean unkind wenches!!! Well done Peace fathima

John Loving Iii September 13, 2008 at 5:54 AM Vince I'm liberal. i work. i have moral values. i believe wellfare should help people who cannot help themselves like the elderly and the handycaped. the people you may turn your head not to see. i'm not gay but i believe if they wan't a man at their death bed they should have that right. WWJD

Laura Mckenzie September 12, 2008 at 7:04 PM Oh My God Vince I just SCREAMED I loved the ending of this so darn true every word you said, my daughter asked me to copy this she loved it so much! So it will be hanging up in U_MASS Lowell for all to read! EXCELLENT write!!!!!! Laur :)

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Heidie Buys September 12, 2008 at 8:41 AM This didn't make me giggle, it made me laugh out loud. So very witty and cuts to the core. You are the very best. Very well done. Regards Heidie

Kristin Reynolds September 12, 2008 at 3:53 AM I knew before I even read this, that last line would be in here. :) Yes...just say no, indeed. Awesome write, vince - Kristin

Derrick Burton September 11, 2008 at 9:20 PM I hope the eagles go all the way this season. This poem is the reason why I am proud to be american, and you are expresing your feelings as we should, I like this poem because its real and holds no punches of whats effecting this country. John Adams in the words of poetry, thats what this is.

Linda Rutherford September 11, 2008 at 7:44 PM LOL. I'm really not a liberal, but I have know people from all sides that this could be about. It's like judging a book by it's cover. Loved the poem, witty and very well written. Made me laugh...and that's always a good thing....Linda

Michael White September 11, 2008 at 6:59 PM I am usualy on the what you would call liberal side of many issues.but I completely loved this one. I am jealous I did not write it. Good Work

Adam Piper September 11, 2008 at 5:14 PM I'm a liberal, but I thought this poem was still well written. Keep up the good work.

James Foulk September 11, 2008 at 3:42 PM Just say no. then we won't have to shoot you. this was a great message and well said.