Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Poet Free verse

If I Am -- You Are (Part 1)

If I am a stonewall, YOU are the shim that makes me Whole
YOU are the root the glorious Bloom, I, the thorned stem of a  Rose

If I am the rising Sun, YOU are the Golden warmth around me
YOU are the illumination of Moonlight, I, just the twinkle of a star

If I am the waves of the ocean, YOU are the Loving Life with in
YOU are the Everlasting Love of my Heart, I, Forever Your Liege
  
                                 TO   BARBARA

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Adell Foster March 31, 2010 at 5:35 PM What a lovely tribute of love, the imagery touches the core of the reader. I am sure that your Barbara will love this marvelous declaration of love. I thank you HG for sharing the read. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always,Adell

Lynette Chachere March 18, 2010 at 12:13 AM this is a beautiful wave of emotions. "I, the thorned stem of a rose" thats a very sweet line.[SOUP MAIL] -Always&Forever your sister spirit Lynn

Carrie Richards March 17, 2010 at 1:15 PM Oh yes....she will love this! How sweet you are!! ~ Love, Carrie

Audrey Haick March 17, 2010 at 9:19 AM Excellent and sweet tribute to Barbara, HG! I'm a "hopeless romantic" so this definitely goes to my favs.! Peace, Audrey

Carolyn Devonshire March 17, 2010 at 6:04 AM What a wonderful tribute to sweet Barbara, HG! Please tell her you've posted it; you'll make her day! Love you, Carolyn