If I

If I can plant a tree, I shall not live in vain. And if I can give birth, I'll leave without pain. If i can give people peace, I shall not live in vain. If I can do all this, I'll live without shame. So I will leave my name An' need no more fame!

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/15/2016 6:42:00 PM

Dorotea, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Tamar Nikuradze
Date: 6/13/2018 1:24:00 PM

Thank you so much <3

Skat A

Date: 11/30/2015 12:03:00 PM

Dorotea, Enjoyed reading.... LUV **SKAT**

Tamar Nikuradze
Date: 6/13/2018 1:24:00 PM

Great to hear that! <3

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/2/2013 5:41:00 AM

- Dorotea, you have written a really good poem. - Welcome to P-Soup - hope you get much pleasure to share your thoughts and words in the form of poems here with us! - Good luck. - Continue with your poems, I want to read more from you in the future. - Have a nice sunny day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Tamar Nikuradze
Date: 6/13/2018 1:48:00 PM

Thanks a lot <3