Patrick Farley Iv Poet Free verse

If Hell Rose To the Surface We Would All Have Burnt Feet

Don't pretend

unless, 
of course
it's worth it in the end.
the present does not mend
time does, the present doesn't mend.
white flowers exhale so we can inhale
time will tell...
time will tell 
if hell rises
demands sacrifices
demoralizes
and burns this world as well.

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Debbie Duncan October 16, 2013 at 2:56 PM very nicely done, I will be reading more of your work ;} And thank you for reading my Forgotten, ;}

Jack Jordan August 6, 2013 at 9:50 PM This is the first poem of yours that I've read. It will not be the last. Fine work... Jack Patrick Farley Iv October 16, 2013 at 11:17 AM Thank you jack!

Terry O'Leary September 17, 2012 at 4:53 AM I'm not sure if Hell is rising... but it sure as hell, that it is decending upon us... Good poem... Terry Patrick Farley Iv September 17, 2012 at 9:44 PM thank you