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If Charles Had Hens

Dicken's 
Chickens

For Brian Strand's Contest:
Two LInes of Two Syllables

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Robin Davis

Date: 5/30/2014 8:42:00 AM

Andrea This is the smallest poem ever but very clever. Thank you for the great comment on my Blue Eyes poem. No, you didn't have to use the songs, that's just how I wrote it. Hugs

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/26/2011 3:10:00 AM

They'd be wise and entertaining, Andrea.:) Many would go to the coop, seekingr inspiration and advice!:) A great way to start the day, thanks for the smiles and chuckles! Mikki

Charles Henderson

Date: 5/26/2011 2:08:00 AM

oh, now I really liked this.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/20/2011 6:29:00 AM

Good one Andrea! And thank you for your kind comments! Still having big problems with my right arm/hand and left shoulder. I don't think that physiotherapy treatment will really help. Who knows? Have a great weekend!...Love, Gert:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/19/2011 9:10:00 PM

nice,god luck Andrea,..p.d.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/19/2011 11:44:00 AM

WELL that is a cute short poem My birthday is on Sat. the 21st. yeah I reach the age of 60 and have mixed feelings on this new age group. I remember when I was younger that seemed so old and now I am here I still feel young (only when I ache do i feel old ha ha)So here's to the new age group. love phyl

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/19/2011 5:38:00 AM

I knew you would come up with a witty gem Andrea, good luck to you :-) love Wilma

Matt Hunt

Date: 5/18/2011 7:08:00 PM

Awesome job with this buddy! R.M.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/18/2011 3:59:00 PM

Oh, that's funny, Andrea. Best wishes in Brian's footle contest. It's nice to see this form again, isn't it? Idol tonight! Love, Carolyn

Daver Austin

Date: 5/18/2011 3:04:00 PM

I'm way behind - my computer went kaput and had to buy a new one, the which is driving me nuts! I am through with the cataract operations and am somewhat spacey. Funny what your eyes will do to you. Have been making the most stupid mistakes. Alzheimers? Probably not. Anywho - I can't help but think of that horrible porridge (was it Squeers?) was feeding those kids in Nicholas Nickelby. Probably just the neck of the chicken got dipped. LOve, daver

Jack Horne

Date: 5/18/2011 2:50:00 PM

LOL - I was hoping you'd come up with another of your wonderful footles : )

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/18/2011 2:23:00 PM

Reads like a winner..I am sure that Brian will be impressed with this one..Good luck...Thanks for stopping by and leaving a kind review of my work..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/18/2011 1:41:00 PM

very intellectual write,

James Foulk

Date: 5/18/2011 12:19:00 PM

really liked this one, brought a smile, have read some great ones in this contest, will be hard for the judges to pick the winner. thank you for reading and commenting on 1957.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2011 10:54:00 AM

I am spending my morning reading wonderful poetry and enjoying it so much. I am so impressed with the poems I have read so far this morning. I am happy yours was among them Andrea. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/18/2011 5:04:00 AM

downright marvelous, andie... a real treat! winning's best, heartie..:) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/18/2011 4:52:00 AM

very cool and clever one Andrea.. if Dicken's had chickens maybe no writings or classics ..too busy on the farm... haha..good luck in the contest my friend.. luv..