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If By Chance

If by chance 
Minutes turn into hours and
Days turn into nights and
I no longer fill your thoughts 
With what once made you feel so alive... 

If by chance 
Choosing to conceal
Yourself from me became routine
And you no longer see yourself in me
Just please say so, so that I to, can learn to let go.

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L.James Tanner

June 1, 2014 at 4:43 PM

Really enjoyed this, such a big punch in a short poem, and the wording was well crafted. Great job!....LJ

Andy Richards

May 17, 2014 at 11:29 PM

Nice poetic flow .. we are all twigs in the proverbial currents of life... sometimes difficult to change course!

Poet Destroyer A

May 14, 2014 at 11:37 PM

Madelin, it's not that easy. I wish to say them words, could heal the void... deep little poem...Linda

Jeremy Street

May 12, 2014 at 1:31 PM

This Is Very Stirring, Beautiful Madelin ~ We Living In A World Where True As Lasting Love, Seems So Rare; Ever In Search Of It's Holy Grail, So To Speak ~ When There Is Little In Life And Countless Hearts That They Know; Losing A Love At Any Turn No Matter It's Depth; Can Become Devastating Unto Their Priceless Baby's....Thus A Verse Such As This Viewed Through Empathy's Eyes; Can Strike It's Chord A Touching Note....Love, Jeremy *

Robert Andrew Lyle

May 10, 2014 at 3:57 PM

If by chance your eyes have strayed stop remember the vows we made that I am still the loving one who gave life to our lovely son. Great write Madelin

Jeffrey Bovee

May 3, 2014 at 10:40 PM

Very cool quick and visual love it

Richard Lamoureux

May 2, 2014 at 5:42 PM

My pleasure, if you have time, come by and have a look. Richard

Richard Lamoureux

May 2, 2014 at 4:29 PM

This is so sad, so real and so amazing.

Madelin Barton

May 2, 2014 at 5:39 PM

Thank you Richard for visiting my page `Maddie

Sara Kendrick

May 2, 2014 at 8:37 AM

Emotive and expressive work that you have penned in this one. I am glad that I chose it to read today. Sara

Madelin Barton

May 2, 2014 at 9:09 AM

Thank you Sara ;) I am so grateful for the written word and for the ability to express what otherwise I could not. Love is a beautiful thing but we as humans very fickle. have a blessed day `Maddie