IF AT FIRST

Five times I asked Jenny
If we ought to wed.
Five times she rejected me,
Said she’d rather be dead.
A little harsh I reckoned

And so I propositioned Dawn.
She answered no as well.
As did Anne and Madelaine
And Millie, Sue and Nell.
Life as a bachelor beckoned

But finally you said yes
And ended all those fears.
So today we are celebrating
The passing of fifty years.
I have savoured every second
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hawley Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 7:06 PM
50 years of marriage after several rejections. Congrats on your win in my contest.
Fowler Avatar
April 27, 2025 at 10:05 AM
Wow. Love at last. Congratulations Bryn! :)
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