If a Wall Were To Spring Before Us

A wall, we could have built across our eyes,
and this, a fragile safety, would subdue
the throbbing pulse of fear that triggers cries
and lights the lamps that bring me back to you.
A trail of lanterns swaying like the feet
of innocence o'er castle walls of stone,
so sturdy in their girth they firmly greet
the wealth of swaying lamps that lights our home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sony'R Ra Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 6:00 PM
Hey Jose... it was actually just a general commentary on the sort of cheap, easy shelter from our own problems or fears... your interpretation is quite interesting... so much more specified... I like it.
Chappell Avatar
November 29, 2010 at 2:51 AM
wow nice write here
Velazquez Avatar
November 28, 2010 at 8:42 PM
I'm interested in knowing is this piece about the safty and comfort we feel towards our family, or our significant other.
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