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If only humans had real feathery wings To jump off from tallest buildings Inorder to take flights at nights An escape , vagabonding , exploring mother natures delight! -suyasha

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/9/2024 9:53:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Raj Ranjit

Date: 8/2/2018 2:02:00 PM

Cool words Jay nepal

Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Date: 9/24/2017 5:37:00 AM

Wonderful lines of wishful thinking, the brevity added charm to this concise poem.

Suyasha Subedi
Date: 9/24/2017 10:43:00 PM

Thank you!