If

If
Your car breaks down
And times are thin
And you need a quick hero
I want to be him

If
You stand on stage and forgot your words
I will cup my hands and feed you mine
Ive crossed the tracks before a speeding train
Before I leapt , I called your name

If
I work underground I push a coo-coo pan
To bring you gold to see you shine
Ive been to hell and brought back coal
To warm you up I will fetch your soul

If
You come to me in the dead of night
And the  gods agree that this is right
I see your silhouette against the light
As if I was standing in your heart



I am your lighthouse burning bright
Your beacon and your beckoning light
Perpetually melting shadows on the sea
Nothing on Earth can extinguish me

I am your fire and I feed on your air
Unless you release me
I remain over there
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Cresswell Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 7:52 AM
To feel such passion for another is truly a gift. Without the poets ability to put these ephemeral experiences into words, that we common folk understand, I believe all depth in life would be lost. Thank you for sharing your gift.
Breedt Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 5:20 AM
I am late with my reply to you. Thank you for your sincerity. I will bring back coal to warm you. Youre so very very kind
Inman Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 8:32 AM
If, such a small word with such great potential. Enjoyed your write.
Breedt Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 10:33 PM
I am so happy to find you here. Thanks James. Truly delighted
Kinch  Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 11:39 AM
Absolutely fabulous, love this.
Breedt Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 12:28 AM
What a nice surprise to find a new comments. Thank you Elizabeth. I will reciprocate
U.D Palawon  Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 3:44 AM
"If" is a great word as it opens so many possibilities to us and reinforce our spirit to hope for a better future. I like this poem. Well penned. :)
Breedt Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 4:48 AM
Hi Sunita. Nice to have you around again..i read your love poem too. I have some more coming up so... stick around
Godwin Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 3:04 PM
JANNIE - WHAT CAN I DO BUT GIVE YOU ALL CAPS? I'M OUTTA WAYS TO SAY HOW IMPRESSED I AM with your writing in the past few weeks. This is so romantic and said romance is touchingly written with beautiful notes of love playing in, between and through each word on each line. I love this very much. I'm going to go delete my current poems now ... CayCay
Breedt Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 4:16 PM
Whoa dont you do that. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. I did not expect such praise. I dont know what to say Gee thanks my dear friend
Breidenthal Avatar
January 11, 2017 at 11:53 PM
This is a hopeful dedication and it is really nice to read this. Really inspiring and great work. Also, encouraging too. :) -JWE
Breedt Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 4:18 PM
Thanks JW i will reciprocate . Very happy to get praise
Barden Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 12:28 AM
LOVE this, Jannie ... the imagery it paints in my mind ... really superb writing.
Breedt Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 1:49 AM
Thanks Greg.
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 12:06 AM
WOw....and now i call it uplifting! Thank you Jannie :) love and peace! rating...
Breedt Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 1:47 AM
Nice to see you here again. Thank you
Callus Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 4:17 PM
Truly a lovely and persuasive poem which should have a magical effect on many a lass, Jannie! Top marks to you! // paul
Breedt Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 10:17 PM
Hi Paul, yes I noticed. I have to barricade my door. Here they come. Ha ha. Its raining women - halleluia
Canerdy Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 8:57 AM
A 7 for your moving, uplifting poem, Jannie! Janice
Smith Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 2:12 PM
Awesome Jannie...a favorite
Breedt Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 3:01 PM
Wunderbahr Tim. May 2017 treat you right. Thanks fôr stopping by
Neels Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 12:05 PM
This is a beauty Jannie. I quite enjoyed it. Thank you for your comments on my writes earlier. I appreciate it.
Breedt Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 3:00 PM
I am getting a lot of attention today and its so wonderful thanks
Green Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 6:36 AM
Such a great and uplifting poem. To be all of these things for someone special...if only.
Breedt Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 6:42 AM
All my favorite poets are cisiting me. Thank you. Indeed , if only
Gupta Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 3:57 AM
This is a powerfully beautiful write ... I read it several times with the wish to return ...
Breedt Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 3:59 AM
O Probhir, how nice of you to say so. Thanks
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