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If a fresh fish I can possibly bake I will make it as sweet as a cake some for you while we sail on water free of whale don't worry, alot of it I will make!

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Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 12/31/2017 5:04:00 AM

A beautiful limerick you have here!

Afzal Nusker

Date: 11/1/2016 1:48:00 AM

I agree with Andrea. A very cute little poem full of sweetness.

Abosede Ogundare
Date: 11/2/2016 4:08:00 PM

Thanks for your sweet comment Afzal, much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2016 6:09:00 PM

oh this is SO cute, Abosede. I hope a lot of people see it. SEVEN

Abosede Ogundare
Date: 11/2/2016 4:06:00 PM

Andrea it's always pleases me to see you on my page. And you could make more people see it if you post it as your Tuesday poem. Thanks for reading friend, and for the SEVEN too!