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If i gave you my heart on a platter
Would you hold it with tinderness
Or smash it with a hammer

Do I know allready
Or just take a chance
A cold heart will never romance

So I entrust my heart, with yours to dance
That light and love
May forever romance

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2012 9:12:00 PM

Elizabeth, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 12/25/2012 4:47:00 AM

Thank you P.D. Merry Christmas to u all, love Elizabeth

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/14/2012 1:53:00 PM

Dear Elizabeth, Chances are if YOU gave YOUR Heart to one YOU LOVED and LOVED YOU Good things will Happen. I wrote a POEM " If I Could" same theme. I thank-YOU for YOUR many Gracious Comments, wish YOU a Happy Holiday Season and HOPE when I come back to see YOU Monday You Have Some new POEMS TO READ DO keep the Pen moving LOVE YOU ALWAYS and Forever YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 12/15/2012 5:06:00 AM

well I sure hope so, my heart could do with a rest :) love as ever Elizabeth

Lucas Ongawo

Date: 12/13/2012 10:11:00 AM

if only we knew what one would do with you after saying 'yes!' guess its a risk to trust, lovely write, Elizabeth-Lucas-

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 12/13/2012 2:26:00 PM

Thank you Lucas, If only we knew a lot of things, but that would make it too easy i guess, such is life :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/9/2012 4:49:00 AM

As a hopeless romantic, they really appealed to me! Thanks for sharing this lovely rhyme!

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 12/9/2012 1:01:00 PM

Thank you Eileen, love Elizabeth

David Scott

Date: 12/7/2012 4:40:00 PM

COPOL WRITE MATE JUST PUT MY POEM IF I BACK ON HERE REEDITED YOU HAVE SOME SOUP MAIL MATE XX DAVIDSCOTT

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 12/4/2012 4:02:00 AM

Lovely poem Elizabeth! If - that is the question that borders on trust. It's like telling someone - I trust you to share in my possibilities. Well written.

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 12/4/2012 10:14:00 AM

Thank you Vicky, love Elizabeth

David Scott

Date: 11/28/2012 10:14:00 AM

wicked did you know I wrote a poem called if I like your chocie of words here xx davidscott

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/28/2012 10:48:00 AM

Thank you David, I think we all know the answer to our ifs, most of the time, Its a case of do or don't for me nowdays, but if the sun comes out tomorrow, I sure will enjoy it :) xx