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IF If you can help others fulfill their dreams And your heart ever seeks far greater Light If you hold true, evade life tempting schemes And with honor, you sleep in peace at night; If better Life and true Love are your goals And every day you give your very best If you reject dark lusts, their heavy tolls And try to give others their needed rest: If your family, its love is your rock Your spirit will dance with dearest of hope If you do not wither from life's hard knocks And you endeavor to expand mind's scope; If kindness, is steady shield you embrace And in its warmth, your soul chooses to bask If you find courage's truth, is no disgrace And ever seek to learn more when you ask: If you embrace Nature, its awesome gifts Seek sanctuary in its sweet abode If gentleness is your key that uplifts And you reject evil you have been sold; If in this life, you hold your head up high And wake each new morn with thankful delight If heart's sincere love you do not deny You will find its blessings forever right! If in times of sorrow you dare not fold And with brave heart face darkest of sorrows If years flow, you find you are very old And you can face shortness of tomorrows; If your past brings with it a certain pride And your memories hold that Life was sweet If from Light's shining truths you do not hide Heaven's gate, your loved ones you will greet! 10-23- 2018 SilentOne's, 'In response to IF....' contest First place awarded....

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Date: 11/26/2018 12:35:00 AM
- Congratulations on yours: "In response to IF ...." poems, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/25/2018 11:23:00 AM
As always well done Robert, congratulations, much deserved...
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Date: 11/25/2018 10:04:00 AM
I agree with every word you say..Life is about having good morals and principles and it is easy if we all try... Great take on the contest Robert.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 11/2/2018 2:59:00 PM
Beautiful inspirational poetry, Sir Robert! Your gallant poetry shines beknighted always. If I had all the words to say ... Prismatic poetry aurora sparkles bright. Love and more love always.
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Date: 10/27/2018 5:14:00 AM
WoW, Robert, All can say is wow! Your respond to the contest theme is outstanding. Although I don't comment on your poetry often, your pen leaves me in awe. You met the challenge in spades. Good luck my poetic friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/24/2018 10:50:00 AM
If, by Rudyard Kipling, oh sorry by Robert Lindlay - much of a muchness! Truly awesome, amazing - great write! Kindest regards, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/24/2018 10:18:00 AM
Hi Robert, I wish you luck with these wonderful lines, in the contest Robert. As always, your words are always deep and thoughtful. I hope this one does well for you Robert. You always take us to poetic excellence with your work Robert. I always enjoy mt reads my friend. Have a wonderful Wednesday. your friend always....Mike. A winner.
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Date: 10/24/2018 8:14:00 AM
Brilliant poem full of sage advise, Robert. I enjoyed it very much~Warren
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Date: 10/24/2018 5:06:00 AM
Wise, genuine and inspiring are your very words! If only Man could convert all those amazing and enlightening IFs! If only Man could walk on the path of such "shining truths" and find "heaven's gate", Humanity would be saved! Your whole gem is a treasure to behold and to save into my fave list.. The last stanza has most captivated my soul! Standing ovation Robert! A poetry of a master! Wisdom of a beautiful soul! My deepest regards. Be blessed always.
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Date: 10/23/2018 11:40:00 PM
Very nicely written, poetic as ever, Robert.
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Date: 10/23/2018 10:54:00 PM
"If you embrace Nature, its awesome gifts Seek sanctuary in its sweet abode If gentleness is your key that uplifts And you reject evil you have been sold;" Robert, poetry flows out of you as easily as sand through the hourglass. Thank you. -Richard
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Date: 10/23/2018 7:46:00 PM
If only I could write like this, Robert!!! Beautiful, my friend. Best of luck to you
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Date: 10/23/2018 6:01:00 PM
Very well written poem, filled with wisdom :)
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Date: 10/23/2018 5:38:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem Robert. You painted a portrait of high morals and uplifting sentiments. A journey through your words takes one to a special place of solace and divinity. Excellent write. You have won the contest already, my friend.
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