Ied


Fabricated to
Kill, guerrilla's general
Unconventional




    http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/war-3.php

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January 14, 2010 at 7:35 PM

And such a sad invention that destroys the lives of far too many. Thought provoking use of this concise form. Keep on writing! Karen

James Peranteau

January 14, 2010 at 10:53 AM

Mr. Fraser,...I think there is more in the saying,...born to raise hell ! great poem Sir ! I meant to comment on this before,...this is def' going in mine fav's ! james

Andrea Dietrich

January 11, 2010 at 10:06 PM

I'm not up on this, James. I don't watch the news nearly as much as I should, but it makes for a nice little senryu. thanks for your comments to me today. LUv, Andrea

Mary Meade Stephenson

January 8, 2010 at 2:32 PM

This senryu James is so very true....and tells of the state the world is in. Powerful! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my poetry. Also many thanks too for your always kind comments....all is much appreciated! Have a blessed day~Mary