Idyllic

Idyllic blue shadow In your whispering eyes Invokes poetry and Image of quietude In a cool riverside Inviting me to the Intense lyrics of peace ________________________________ 26/02/2016

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John Michaels

Date: 3/12/2017 5:47:00 AM

The essence of tranquility captured concisely! Congrats on your win!

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/12/2017 6:48:00 AM

Thank you ...

Mark Martin

Date: 3/4/2017 3:13:00 PM

Great imagery Probir! Congratulations! :-)

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/5/2017 6:33:00 AM

Thank you, Mark ...

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/2/2017 8:44:00 AM

Congrats Probir to win in your wonderful poem

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/2/2017 9:22:00 AM

Thank you, Anisha ... Your 'I' was very nice too ...

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/1/2017 6:44:00 PM

So beautiful and poetic, Probir - congrats on your win!

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/2/2017 3:22:00 AM

Thank you, Agnes ...

Jan Allison

Date: 3/1/2017 5:03:00 PM

oh so beautiful Probir many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/2/2017 3:23:00 AM

Thank you, Jan ...

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/1/2017 3:48:00 PM

Wonderful imagery and word creativity here, Probir! Congrats on your top win :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/2/2017 3:26:00 AM

Thank you for dropping by and liking ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2017 3:23:00 PM

this is AWESOME, Probir. BIG congrats.

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/2/2017 3:27:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea ...

Roy Pett

Date: 3/1/2017 11:31:00 AM

Congratulations Probir, great Pleiades, well deserved win, :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/2/2017 3:27:00 AM

Thank you, dear friend ...

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/1/2017 10:35:00 AM

Beautifully written, Probir! Nice flowing lines and restful imagery! Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/1/2017 11:20:00 AM

Thank you, Kim ... Writing pleiades for your contest is a pleasure ... Thanks for liking the poem and for the placement ...

Paul Callus

Date: 3/1/2017 10:29:00 AM

Wow! This is beautiful, Probir...my type of poetry! Very worthy of its podium finish! Congratulations! ~ Regards // paul

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/1/2017 11:21:00 AM

Thank you, Paul ... Regards ...

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 3/1/2017 9:51:00 AM

Beautiful Probir, I love 'whispering eyes' especially!

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/1/2017 11:22:00 AM

Thank you ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/1/2017 3:42:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great win in Pleiades I contest, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/1/2017 3:47:00 AM

Thank you, Anne ...

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 3/1/2017 1:40:00 AM

Very beautiful Pleiades, Probir - congratulations, my friend!

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/1/2017 3:36:00 AM

Thank you ...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/28/2017 10:09:00 PM

Congrats!

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/1/2017 3:36:00 AM

Thanks ...

Eve Roper

Date: 2/28/2017 9:32:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/1/2017 3:37:00 AM

Thank you, Eve

Yasemin Balandi

Date: 2/27/2017 7:54:00 AM

brilliant

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/28/2017 5:21:00 AM

Thank you ...

Eve Roper

Date: 2/26/2017 2:56:00 PM

love the imagery you have created, Probir.. good luck in the contest already a winner...

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/28/2017 5:22:00 AM

Thank you, Eve ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/26/2017 2:16:00 PM

Inspiring images imbued with inflammatory poetic imagination! A seven dear, Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/28/2017 5:23:00 AM

Thank you ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/26/2017 11:45:00 AM

- Lovely pleiade, Probir - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/28/2017 5:23:00 AM

Thank you, Anne ...

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/26/2017 8:50:00 AM

This is a beauty, Probir:) Good luck my friend.

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/26/2017 11:30:00 AM

Thank you, Daniel ...

Daniel Handschuh

Date: 2/26/2017 8:02:00 AM

Very prettily written indeed.

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/26/2017 11:32:00 AM

Thank you ...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/26/2017 7:20:00 AM

Lovely, Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/26/2017 11:33:00 AM

Thank you, Kim ...