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Idol

A wash of words and he’d got me a brushstroke blue-jean greeting ‘hi, howareya’ Quivering in my Static stilletoes Uncomposed, all rhythm gone ‘um,fine thanks’ His curling smile-sneer Lascivious lipped, affection affected. The ground shifted I breathe in his effort scent, and beer breath, Pheromone filled as cheap cologne the movie in my mind sees the handshake as entwined torsos, arms, legs. Then he moves on.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/9/2014 12:34:00 AM
This is a beautiful idol. As all idols with beer breath, arms and legs.)) I like. My English is very small, but I`m study it and want to write poems into English. Thank you, Kaye. M.K.
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Date: 2/22/2010 8:36:00 PM
GREAT writing here. I love how you put me in the moment with this "idol" Luv , Andrea
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