Idleness

In a wintry-like night, When I go beyond my life And moments of being motionless, I lie down beside, Drinking tea with my wife, Just to get rid of Idleness!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/1/2013 8:39:00 PM

Bassam, congratulations on having your poem Featured this past week. It was nice reading your poem, and the reaction your wife has on your idleness.. xox~ Linda

Daver Austin

Date: 5/28/2013 8:41:00 AM

I like to do this too, Bassam - "when I go beyond life." Great line. Congrats on the selection. daver

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/28/2013 6:15:00 AM

enjoyed well done

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 9/25/2012 6:48:00 PM

This is a poignant read delivered with style. Congratulations on being featured here this week. Very well done my friend!

Richard Palmer

Date: 7/6/2012 5:21:00 AM

nice write,Bassam

Bassam Yassin
Date: 7/10/2012 5:13:00 PM

Richard, thanks for reading...:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/26/2012 7:18:00 AM

I want to thank you so much for your kind words on my writings Bassam. I am so far behind on everything including my life away from PoetrySoup. So will you please forgive me if I am not right on top of my comments and thank you's. I am trying. It is a pleasure to read your poetry today as I leave you this thank you. Love and blessings, Carol