Idleness

How long have you been in me ? You who loiter and linger Shattering all my dreams Awating all the ordeals Turning my bones weak Making my spirit bleak For iam growing lazy And admiring a life; cozy Forcing my forfeit to flourish And my serendipity to vanish They said idleness is destructive Want to undo my follies and be constructive Alas! Never too late To change my fate

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Beata Agustin

Date: 5/8/2023 9:02:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.