idle musings

is sentience a curse if we feel
God’s breath breathing all forms
and is innocence heart’s weakness
as bliss magnetism organic form storms
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Anderson Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 12:15 PM
Wow, what a mouthful, i enjoyed reading that, really some good English, thanks Gerald
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March 20, 2025 at 7:11 PM
Happy you were moved by these words, Andre, thanks for dropping by
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