Idle musings

Behold the chest of space heaving,
all manifest worlds perceiving,
in, within but not of life forms,
enlivened by God’s breath that warms
hearts as they plunge into embrace,
yet leaving in the void no trace,
of their emotes, from God’s bliss boat
or whilst skydiving in free float,
heaven recording each intent,
that grants the throb of love consent.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 12:37 PM
I really like the part about heaven recording each event. I sure hope I have more good than bad recorded. My bad is mostly just doing nothing but actively doing good is so much more admirable
Seeker Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 5:49 PM
Acknowledging God’s presence within is enough actually, as a practice. All enablements occur automatically, if heart be pure and childlike.
Ivy Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 8:08 AM
So beautifully written! Especially the line, 'heaven recording each intent'. It's short, concise, and I loved it. Wow!!!
Seeker Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 9:30 AM
Thank you, Ivy. I’m delighted you enjoyed this poem.
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