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Idle musings

Behold the chest of space heaving, all manifest worlds perceiving, in, within but not of life forms, enlivened by God’s breath that warms hearts as they plunge into embrace, yet leaving in the void no trace, of their emotes, from God’s bliss boat or whilst skydiving in free float, heaven recording each intent, that grants the throb of love consent.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/22/2024 12:37:00 PM

I really like the part about heaven recording each event. I sure hope I have more good than bad recorded. My bad is mostly just doing nothing but actively doing good is so much more admirable

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/22/2024 5:49:00 PM

Acknowledging God’s presence within is enough actually, as a practice. All enablements occur automatically, if heart be pure and childlike.

Ivy Ivy

Date: 9/22/2024 8:08:00 AM

So beautifully written! Especially the line, 'heaven recording each intent'. It's short, concise, and I loved it. Wow!!!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/22/2024 9:30:00 AM

Thank you, Ivy. I’m delighted you enjoyed this poem.