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Idle Disconnect

I hate this void within
this gaping hole
that screams of silence
thumping echoes in my brain
endlessly night and day

Images i can't decipher
hover of the edge of darkness
tinkering their bits of bitterness
a black hole in motion
without rhyme or reason


AP: 2nd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 4:45 PM
sounds exactly like the anxiety I felt in the weeks prior to surgery...screams of silence and black hole in motion. Well done, Line...have a pleasant evening, Sara
Gauthier Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 5:10 PM
Glad to know you seem to have come through in fine form.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 8:58 AM
Sounds like a tough place to be! Hugs
Gauthier Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 5:11 PM
Indeed would not be pleasant ~ thanks for your visit and comment, Kim
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