Identity

Identity of  I 
The thought that made me 
contemplate who ever I'd see
The vision was blur but yet 
made me instigate whatever I 
dreamed 
To my friends and relatives who 
eventually see the truth in me
By definition there's more to it, 
made me question did it really 
describe me

Not really, see I'm a loner
Do I smoke? Maybe let my 
mind drain but doesn't make 
me a stoner
Lost inside depths of a monster 
that surfaces as I grow older
But just as I'm older, Me, 
Myself and I bond closer

Despite the struggle and way 
past the rumors and disses
I stay strong postponing the 
thought of braking into a 
million pieces 
The idea of hope banished all 
fears in which many rely
All my time invested in 
questions asking who am I?  
But really the question is...

Who are you?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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September 18, 2012 at 4:15 PM
this is deep dark scrach that gloomy and dank like winter fog on a dark night. i like this alot kindof like what i write
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