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Identical Laces

I thought she was insane
I think my world is about to
I thought she was full of her self
I think the world insists
I thought she was villain
I think she was too hurt, so she rebelled
I thought she mumbled nonsense
I think she preserves her peace
I thought she was stubborn
I think she might be right
I thought I would never understand her
The fact I do
I thought she made reason and reasons
I think I made the same denial
I thought I would be nothing like her
I think I am wrong
She's what made her
What's hers resemble on me
We're just identical laces
Which jumbled in a massive and realistic slipknot

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Date: 5/1/2016 10:16:00 AM
Entangled, lovely write Yanny.
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Date: 2/29/2016 6:46:00 AM
- Dear Yanny my friend :) - I wish you and little Ken one lovely new week .... with much smile and playing :) - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/24/2016 2:31:00 AM
I see I missed this one Yanny. Great title and poem Yanny.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/28/2016 7:22:00 AM
Rick!!! Glad to have you here as well, and thank you for still supporting me in writing :D I'm trying my best to keep my spirit up in poetry :D missed you too Rick :D
Date: 2/18/2016 12:01:00 PM
enjoyed this poem. LINDA
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/28/2016 7:19:00 AM
Linda!! Thank you for the supports, I am so glad to have so many visits and comments by you, I will catch up as soon as possible. Thank you and missed you too :D btw I've been thinking to say this for a long time to you, seems like you are into TWD. I am such a huge fan of the show as well hahaha
Date: 12/21/2015 7:00:00 AM
- A great poem, dear Yanny - I wish you, Ken and your family a peaceful and beautiful Christmas - Hope all is well with you - Enjoy with joy :) - Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/21/2015 7:27:00 AM
Hello Anne! We're doing great, how about your upcoming Christmas? Merry Christmas Anne, kiss and hug for you too :D

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