Yanny Widjanarko Poet Free verse

Identical Laces

I thought she was insane
I think my world is about to
I thought she was full of her self
I think the world insists
I thought she was villain
I think she was too hurt, so she rebelled
I thought she mumbled nonsense
I think she preserves her peace
I thought she was stubborn
I think she might be right
I thought I would never understand her
The fact I do
I thought she made reason and reasons
I think I made the same denial
I thought I would be nothing like her
I think I am wrong


She's what made her
What's hers resemble on me
We're just identical laces
Which jumbled in a massive and realistic slipknot

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James Inman May 1, 2016 at 10:16 AM Entangled, lovely write Yanny.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 29, 2016 at 6:46 AM - Dear Yanny my friend :) - I wish you and little Ken one lovely new week .... with much smile and playing :) - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux February 24, 2016 at 2:31 AM I see I missed this one Yanny. Great title and poem Yanny. Yanny Widjanarko February 28, 2016 at 7:22 AM Rick!!! Glad to have you here as well, and thank you for still supporting me in writing :D I'm trying my best to keep my spirit up in poetry :D missed you too Rick :D

Poet Destroyer A February 18, 2016 at 12:01 PM enjoyed this poem. LINDA Yanny Widjanarko February 28, 2016 at 7:19 AM Linda!! Thank you for the supports, I am so glad to have so many visits and comments by you, I will catch up as soon as possible. Thank you and missed you too :D btw I've been thinking to say this for a long time to you, seems like you are into TWD. I am such a huge fan of the show as well hahaha

Anne-Lise Andresen December 21, 2015 at 7:00 AM - A great poem, dear Yanny - I wish you, Ken and your family a peaceful and beautiful Christmas - Hope all is well with you - Enjoy with joy :) - Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :) Yanny Widjanarko December 21, 2015 at 7:27 AM Hello Anne! We're doing great, how about your upcoming Christmas? Merry Christmas Anne, kiss and hug for you too :D