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Ideas Are Slowly Growing

The creative juices are flowing so, why cant I keep going I'm starting to lose sleep this crap is getting deep The ideas are slowly growing but, they're not overflowing These things are not unique they are losing their mystique So, what I'm proposing is to start composing Now I must critique words that are oblique and defiantly code in things that are imposing Then, use a technique that helps me to peak by just juxtaposing things that are engrossing

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Joe Dimino

Date: 1/17/2022 7:30:00 AM

The best way to write...is to write:) Well said, Holly. Excellent use of language. Joe.

Holly Bohto
Date: 2/22/2022 9:57:00 AM

Thank you so much Joe...

Richard Palmer

Date: 11/4/2021 12:48:00 PM

i love your flow, that's the way to go, keep those lines going, they'll soon be overflowing, thumbs up Holly

Holly Bohto
Date: 2/22/2022 9:56:00 AM

Still struggling to write...thank you for your encouraging comment.

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/24/2021 7:59:00 AM

Well, I know this feeling. Excellent write! All inspiration comes from within really, and not without. For me, what always helps is, allowing, trusting, in the release of what is inside. While also reinventing myself on the outside, not determined solely by the needs of others nor their expectations of me. I think more release than anything else. Anyway -- only my 2 cents on the subject. Very complicated.

Holly Bohto
Date: 9/25/2021 2:08:00 AM

Thank you Joe I have been struggling to write lately and I appreciate your feedback.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/22/2021 11:31:00 AM

I believe you!

Holly Bohto
Date: 9/22/2021 4:11:00 PM

Thank you Rico.