Holly Bohto Poet Enclosed Rhyme

Ideas Are Slowly Growing

The creative juices are flowing
so, why cant I keep going
I'm starting to lose sleep
this crap is getting deep
The ideas are slowly growing
but, they're not overflowing
These things are not unique
they are losing their mystique 
So, what I'm proposing
is to start composing
Now I must critique 
words that are oblique
and defiantly code in
things that are imposing
Then, use a technique 
that helps me to peak
by just juxtaposing 
things that are engrossing

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Joseph P. DiMino January 17, 2022 at 7:30 AM The best way to write...is to write:) Well said, Holly. Excellent use of language. Joe. Holly Bohto February 22, 2022 at 9:57 AM Thank you so much Joe...

Richard Palmer November 4, 2021 at 12:48 PM i love your flow, that's the way to go, keep those lines going, they'll soon be overflowing, thumbs up Holly Holly Bohto February 22, 2022 at 9:56 AM Still struggling to write...thank you for your encouraging comment.

Joseph P. DiMino September 24, 2021 at 7:59 AM Well, I know this feeling. Excellent write! All inspiration comes from within really, and not without. For me, what always helps is, allowing, trusting, in the release of what is inside. While also reinventing myself on the outside, not determined solely by the needs of others nor their expectations of me. I think more release than anything else. Anyway -- only my 2 cents on the subject. Very complicated. Holly Bohto September 25, 2021 at 2:08 AM Thank you Joe I have been struggling to write lately and I appreciate your feedback.

Rico Leffanta September 22, 2021 at 11:31 AM I believe you! Holly Bohto September 22, 2021 at 4:11 PM Thank you Rico.