Ideas

My knuckles have bled
We are all fighting for life
Souls eat souls so carelessly
In bloodlust lost sight
Controlling my muffled ideas
Though mine holds still in these words
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 2:45 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Justin. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with love, good health, and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol
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February 26, 2010 at 4:47 PM
Intresting idea . Diffrent but good. enjoyed..
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February 26, 2010 at 3:18 PM
Glad that you are stilling holding your ideas. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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