Ideas

IDEAS
so
profound
  distinct
&
imposing
an idea 
  made visual
rendered
 specific
modern
&contemporary
extroverted
   spontaneous
yet
intense
&
 irregular

 encountered
immediately
 in
the unknown
yet
prolific
utopia
of
yesterday's
 visual
affinities

NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
October 5, 2022 at 11:34 PM
Is this a format you have invented? Regardless, it is an intriguing one.
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 8:37 AM
Interesting form and thought Brian. I like it. Linda
Poet Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 6:40 AM
The seeds of an idea had already grown into your creative mind's lovely poetic talent. A new method of conceptualization and writing has replaced the obscure but abundant utopia of yesterday's visual.
Chiri Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 12:38 AM
Nicely done!;)
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