Ideal Couple

I do like her beautiful eyebrow 
But she plucked it and drew something 
I do like her beautiful eyelash and eyelid 
But she painted it with colors 
I do like her reddish lip 
But she always uses lipstick 
I do like the melody 
But she likes rock 
I do like family movies 
But she likes action movies 
I do like watching discovery 
But she likes comedy series 
I am a vegetarian 
But she is a non vegetarian 
I do like cheap outfits 
But she likes costly 
We are acting as an ideal couple.



a simple poem .nothing serious .just time pass .jk
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October 20, 2012 at 8:21 PM
How charming..this is very nice and enchanting indeed jdoll..JL
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October 21, 2012 at 11:03 PM
thank you .your doll
Whitehead Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 3:27 AM
Ha ha - - No two people are alike. I've been married 45 years and we are quite different in our tastes. It could be boring if two people were exactly the same.
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July 11, 2012 at 10:00 AM
thank you.jk
Andresen Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 7:34 AM
Well written jk. - when two hearts meet, it may be hot flames........ - Thank you for always come back to read some of mine poems. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise
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June 23, 2012 at 8:51 AM
thank you dear poetess .jk
Britt Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 2:03 AM
SO CUTE!! Personality matters I guess HAHA. "plucked" and "draw" don't verbally agree. "plucked" is past tense so "drew" would be correct in line 2 and since you two are one group, "AN ideal couple" would be proper in the last line. Poetry is healing and I enjoy reading poets' work and writing as well <3
Britt Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 2:16 AM
:)
Chakrapany Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 2:08 AM
thank you .i have modified this poem as per your suggestions .thank you very much .jk
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