Ideal Couple

I do like her beautiful eyebrow But she plucked it and drew something I do like her beautiful eyelash and eyelid But she painted it with colors I do like her reddish lip But she always uses lipstick I do like the melody But she likes rock I do like family movies But she likes action movies I do like watching discovery But she likes comedy series I am a vegetarian But she is a non vegetarian I do like cheap outfits But she likes costly We are acting as an ideal couple. a simple poem .nothing serious .just time pass .jk

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Juniper Lock

Date: 10/20/2012 8:21:00 PM

How charming..this is very nice and enchanting indeed jdoll..JL

Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 10/21/2012 11:03:00 PM

thank you .your doll

Josie Whitehead

Date: 6/24/2012 3:27:00 AM

Ha ha - - No two people are alike. I've been married 45 years and we are quite different in our tastes. It could be boring if two people were exactly the same.

Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 7/11/2012 10:00:00 AM

thank you.jk

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/23/2012 7:34:00 AM

Well written jk. - when two hearts meet, it may be hot flames........ - Thank you for always come back to read some of mine poems. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise

Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 6/23/2012 8:51:00 AM

thank you dear poetess .jk

Justcallme Britt

Date: 6/22/2012 2:03:00 AM

SO CUTE!! Personality matters I guess HAHA. "plucked" and "draw" don't verbally agree. "plucked" is past tense so "drew" would be correct in line 2 and since you two are one group, "AN ideal couple" would be proper in the last line. Poetry is healing and I enjoy reading poets' work and writing as well <3

Justcallme Britt
Date: 6/22/2012 2:16:00 AM

Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 6/22/2012 2:08:00 AM

thank you .i have modified this poem as per your suggestions .thank you very much .jk