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I'd Love To Meet You Both

I'd Love To Meet You Both ****************** The topics you have mentioned all relevant, still to this day. It's like I know your husband, for I too, know just what to say! You didn't mention world pollution, especially microplastic Are you in denial of a situation, which has now turned to drastic? Plastic pollution, yes, and scientists are now finding drugs, Not just illegal ones, category 'C', fly-tipped by well-meaning mugs. Love to meet your husband, hear what he has to say! Sadly words mean nothing if all the problems won't go away! I know for I have made it known, my words most succinct! For we must stop polluting or we really will become extinct! Mother Nature's issuing warnings that the weather will get worse. Climate warming is happening and it's not some silly curse. Climate change, totally different, nowt to do with waste pollution. that's affecting climate warming, recycling, definitely a solution. Climate change that's caused by the planet tilting on its axis. Sunsets I have noticed moved, on the weather it has placed, yes, taxes! So yes, I would like to meet your husband and you, if you agree, For, I must confess, your poetry has always delighted me! Reference your husband, I'd like to hear what he has to say on hell, For if you take a look around you, were nearly there as well! El Niño, it, he, she, has moved toward the northern hemisphere, Temperatures will soar, and many lands it will burn lay bear. This is natures way, a warning, to recycle all our waste! El Niño is opening the doors to hell and it is just a little taste. I hope you're not finding it boring what I have written about, In a book, it should be published, perhaps there it will have more clout. Well, Pam, I think an apology I am owing you for my little rant, Sorry, but like your husband, I just had to add another slant.

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Date: 7/14/2018 9:32:00 PM
Mick, you have excellent critical judgement and your insights here are smart and well delivered!
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Mick Talbot
Date: 7/15/2018 12:41:00 AM
Thanking you most kindly L.M. truly appreciate your kind words, Mick
Date: 7/14/2018 1:16:00 PM
This is a very well structured poem with a solid point to make. A lyrical yet, informative poem, full of emotion and passion. Your rhyming is very good and the theme flows throughout the work. Your word choice is good and the message sent is both strong and entertaining. Emile.
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Date: 7/14/2018 2:39:00 PM
Wow, honoured and humbled I am, my most gracious thanks for your kind review Emile, Mick