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I'D Love To Know Love

I'd love to know love and not just the typical kind I'd like to know the unconditional no matter what you'll forever be mine type of love The ones expressed with not just kisses but with hugs I often dream about these things because truthfully I haven't seen these sentiments displayed on my big screen. The love of now is tainted. No one tries to repaint it. So far I haven't seen any changes. People treat love like it's tasteless. Use it and abuse it like mouth wash until they've gotten their full and down the drain it goes leaving someone hurt and the other the fool You think I'm going to throw myself into this pool? I'd love to know love and I know love would love to know me but I've been playing hide and seek for so long I'm not sure love and I will ever be in sync So I throw on that thong and pretend that it's comfortable when I'd rather have some granny panties on if only I had someone to snuggle next to who could love me like I was meant to my single days would be through But who am I kidding? Love and I are strangers I wish I knew love the independent girl walks alone and flips her own pages

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/6/2009 10:44:00 PM
I know it's not the common poem... I just wrote what I felt. Wasn't trying to go for any special form or order... just rambled as you said...
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Date: 5/6/2009 10:35:00 PM
Theme is good but it seems more to me like rambling thoughts of love. The flow is not good, it takes away from the message. Nice try with the imagery and metaphor and simile. Judy Riley
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