I'D Be

If she was a planet, I’d be the comet that keeps passing by… watch my fly
If she were light, I’d be a shade producing object… basking
If she was an ocean, 32 degrees Fahrenheit and rising 
would begin my journey towards her end... flow with me
She’s the landscape, my mind can’t escape… paint it perfectly
My contrast and comparison… debate but be on my team
The relativity of my theory… go beyond what's seen
and the cream in my cone that lips can condone… do what it do
If she were whatever, I’d be the perfect opposite… we fit like that
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Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 1:00 PM
Love the rhythm to this piece of art of yours!!!
Lewis Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 9:52 AM
Thank You
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