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Icy Driveway

After a snow storm The snow covers ground Outside it is cold Then it starts to warm The rain pours downwards It begins to freeze Sidewalks and driveways Are very icy It is hard to walk Salt is not put down Walking the small steps Trying not to fall The driveways are dangerous This does not seem right Salt should be put down For the safety to walk

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/5/2019 11:46:00 AM
Yes it should be! So many places don't; it's frustrating. Good idea for a poem.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/5/2019 2:01:00 PM
Hello M.L. Kiser, thank you for your comment. I am always scared to break something from an icy driveway or sidewalk. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 2/4/2019 5:22:00 PM
I feel you pain Darlene!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/5/2019 11:18:00 AM
Hello Timothy, it is uncomfortable to have wet feet. Now I am okay and my feet are dry. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 2/4/2019 4:18:00 PM
wise words especially during these freezing months, darlene.... all the best!...huggs
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/4/2019 4:56:00 PM
Hello Nette, I struggle with this often. I walk like i am on a tight rope arms stretched out for balance.Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 2/4/2019 3:57:00 PM
Great advise, I still slip and fall even without the weather change. Hugs Eve
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/4/2019 5:06:00 PM
hello Eve, I do not have balance for the deep snow or the icy driveways. I am always scared to break a leg or an arm. Thank you for your lovely comment have a nice evening my friend.

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