Icing

Silvery white, thick fog icing All trees, road, can't see far Great veil disguise for deer to roam Reveals where spider webs are Written Sunday September 30,2012

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2012 2:02:00 PM

I love that , a disguise for deer to roam!!

Robert Pettit

Date: 10/4/2012 11:41:00 AM

I see you are not describing the vanilla flavored stuff found on cupcakes. Good write nevertheless.

Daver Austin

Date: 10/2/2012 12:41:00 PM

I can see that spider web icing. Love it. Love, daver

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/2/2012 10:01:00 AM

this is lovely Sara,

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/1/2012 11:11:00 PM

Hi Sara, i like your little verse.. i know the image of this tree..covered by webs, like icing... God bless,,pd

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 10/1/2012 10:22:00 PM

excellent write

Holly Moore

Date: 10/1/2012 7:24:00 PM

I can just imagine going across the Golden Gate and not being able to see the top of it..I love the title! Thanks for reading my poems...: )

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/1/2012 11:57:00 AM

i like the images flowing smoothly and expressively in their own way, sara ...even through a disguise, the web can be seen... a wonder!..: huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/1/2012 11:49:00 AM

A spiderweb is a masterpiece and it's also your little poem Sara. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/1/2012 7:34:00 AM

Yes, the spider webs reveal themselves very nicely within the dense fog, all the dew that is associated with them is strewn about! This is a very awesome write my friend, I truly love this delightful poem! I just love the fog and everything that comes with it...except driving in it! Sitting at home looking at the fog is quite beautiful, as is your poem Sara! I really enjoyed reading this great write this morning! What a wonderful piece, Excellent Work!!