Icing

Silvery white, thick fog icing
All trees, road, can't see far
Great veil disguise for deer to roam
Reveals where spider webs are  

Written Sunday September 30,2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 2:02 PM
I love that , a disguise for deer to roam!!
Pettit Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 11:41 AM
I see you are not describing the vanilla flavored stuff found on cupcakes. Good write nevertheless.
Austin Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 12:41 PM
I can see that spider web icing. Love it. Love, daver
Horsman Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 10:01 AM
this is lovely Sara,
A   Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 11:11 PM
Hi Sara, i like your little verse.. i know the image of this tree..covered by webs, like icing... God bless,,pd
Kovrlija Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 10:22 PM
excellent write
Moore Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 7:24 PM
I can just imagine going across the Golden Gate and not being able to see the top of it..I love the title! Thanks for reading my poems...: )
Onclaud Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 11:57 AM
i like the images flowing smoothly and expressively in their own way, sara ...even through a disguise, the web can be seen... a wonder!..: huggs!
Andresen Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 11:49 AM
A spiderweb is a masterpiece and it's also your little poem Sara. oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Sivey Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 7:34 AM
Yes, the spider webs reveal themselves very nicely within the dense fog, all the dew that is associated with them is strewn about! This is a very awesome write my friend, I truly love this delightful poem! I just love the fog and everything that comes with it...except driving in it! Sitting at home looking at the fog is quite beautiful, as is your poem Sara! I really enjoyed reading this great write this morning! What a wonderful piece, Excellent Work!!
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