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Iceolation

You put me out, me out I was once a flame You hated me no doubt I'm the one to blame It's pretty cold outside I'm shivering from the inside You left me all alone Frankly, I am left here on my own I decide to isolate I procrastinate I am feeling great Then, I know my fate I know I am too late I am the number 8 I run to His gate I no longer isolate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/29/2018 3:25:00 PM
love it from the clever title to the ending,. great rhyme and wordplay you have an awesome pen David:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/31/2018 10:26:00 PM
Thank you tremendously!
Date: 12/26/2018 8:26:00 PM
Good for you my friend...
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Date: 12/27/2018 8:38:00 PM
:) Thanx!! Have a fantastic week~ -JWE
Date: 12/24/2018 9:22:00 AM
JWE, great rhyming write, it is so hard to deal with lost love, it can destroy the soul ~
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Date: 12/24/2018 12:06:00 PM
Thank you kindly! I hope you have a splendid rest of your week! :) -JWE

Book: Shattered Sighs