David William Breidenthal Poet Rhyme

Iceolation

You put me out, me out
I was once a flame
You hated me no doubt 
I'm the one to blame

It's pretty cold outside
I'm shivering from the inside 
You left me all alone
Frankly, I am left here on my own 

I decide to isolate 
I procrastinate 
I am feeling great
Then, I know my fate 
I know I am too late
I am the number 8
I run to His gate
I no longer isolate

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Jan Allison December 29, 2018 at 3:25 PM love it from the clever title to the ending,. great rhyme and wordplay you have an awesome pen David:-) hugs Jan xx David William Breidenthal December 31, 2018 at 10:26 PM Thank you tremendously!

Pashang Salehi December 26, 2018 at 8:26 PM Good for you my friend... David William Breidenthal December 27, 2018 at 8:38 PM :) Thanx!! Have a fantastic week~ -JWE

Constance La France December 24, 2018 at 9:22 AM JWE, great rhyming write, it is so hard to deal with lost love, it can destroy the soul ~ David William Breidenthal December 24, 2018 at 12:06 PM Thank you kindly! I hope you have a splendid rest of your week! :) -JWE