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Iceberg

Indigenous your home
Incomprensible
Indestructable ship
Indecisive captain
Interrupted this trip
Impression of safety
Indelible losses

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Hiya Sharma

September 18, 2023 at 8:38 AM

A very well crafted Pleiades poem this is, you've painted a whole scene in such few words, where the captain loses control on decisions and resulting in indelible losses, icebergs are tricky and so was is the thought on writing about them, but you did a great job!

Sam Scott

September 18, 2023 at 9:02 AM

Aw Hiya, you are a blessing with your kindness. First attempt so nice to hear I communicated somewhat. I love your work so will study more intently. But thank you x

Anitha Jayasankar

September 14, 2023 at 5:31 AM

Sam, this is well done. The effects of an ice berg during a ship journey, the losses captured well. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your visit to my page. God bless... ~ Ani

Sam Scott

September 14, 2023 at 5:34 AM

You did amazing! Really enjoyed your work :)) (thank you for your kindness at my meager first-attempt)