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Iceberg

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Indigenous your home Incomprensible Indestructable ship Indecisive captain Interrupted this trip Impression of safety Indelible losses

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/18/2023 8:38:00 AM

A very well crafted Pleiades poem this is, you've painted a whole scene in such few words, where the captain loses control on decisions and resulting in indelible losses, icebergs are tricky and so was is the thought on writing about them, but you did a great job!

Sam Scott
Date: 9/18/2023 9:02:00 AM

Aw Hiya, you are a blessing with your kindness. First attempt so nice to hear I communicated somewhat. I love your work so will study more intently. But thank you x

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 9/14/2023 5:31:00 AM

Sam, this is well done. The effects of an ice berg during a ship journey, the losses captured well. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your visit to my page. God bless... ~ Ani

Sam Scott
Date: 9/14/2023 5:34:00 AM

You did amazing! Really enjoyed your work :)) (thank you for your kindness at my meager first-attempt)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/14/2023 4:19:00 AM

Well done, Sam!

Sam Scott
Date: 9/14/2023 4:55:00 AM

You are *way* too kind, Kim. This is a diversion for me (unlike the Titanic) but I do think I'll be sinking with this one :-/