Ice Skates

With ice under your feet... The wind in your hair.. The freedom you have as you spread your wings.. Gliding along with no chains... Feeling like a star in the middle of a ring... feeling like a kid again with my ice skates on..

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2012 9:25:00 PM

Dear Cory, I never had the pleasure to enjoy ice skates... I think your poem paints a picture and takes me back to a ((wish I had memory)) the guts to skate... enjoyed,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/11/2012 8:04:00 PM

remember when I did this with my sons long ago cory.. so fun like your expressive words luv.. very visual and grand ..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2012 6:52:00 PM

This is really nice, Cory. I love skating too. But now it hurts my hip to do it, DANG