Ice Sculpture

In the cool, white 
fluorescent light 
a scalpel rasps, whispering, 
insisting on detail. 
A chisel flicks, 
deft and sure, 
snicking, razing, 
in the clean steam 
of icebreath. 
Formless, frosty 
bulbous ice 
has pattern 
punched into it. 
An awl starts clattering, 
keen steel stabbing 
shards of crystal free 
to shower down 
as glassy shrapnel. 
Ruth Amid the Corn 
takes form, 
growing 
as matter falls away. 
Final flurries of fussing, 
flowers wreathed around, 
and the beauty is inched 
into the fug 
of the banquet, 
sweating. 
Ruth weeps unseen, 
pristine for now, 
but already warming.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Lawless Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 2:51 PM
this is way above a snow man hot chocolate in an igloo...missed it in the contest but an glad I was back checking the winners....they do ice sculpting on the Boston common every winter...amazing work...the poem .... not the ice...
Coy Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 10:31 PM
Deeply appreciated, John. Thank you. And the Boston Common detail means a lot to me. Michael
Daniels Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 5:39 PM
Whoa ! Skills & Consciousness deepens as warmth melts ice, sweat becoming white tears of luminosity as work gets done with Ruth observing. Michael, you are a master of subtle juxtaposition when you go within. On the surface, the funny ones are good too. Have a good week, Ghairo.
Coy Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 5:49 PM
What wonderful remarks, Ghairo! Thank you so much! Michael
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