Alexis Y. Poet Than-Bauk

Ice Pond-Tb

The ice broke, pond
what's beyond.. Guy,
hair blonde...cold stiff





January 27, 2019
Contest: Than Baulk
Sponsor: Charles Messina







January 27, 2019
Contest: Than Baulk
Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Ann Gilmour February 14, 2019 at 12:27 AM Sending congrats on your chilly win Alexis, well done with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison February 13, 2019 at 3:45 PM Dropping back to say many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner February 11, 2019 at 10:52 PM Congratulations Alexis, glad to see this on the winner's list!

Charles Messina February 11, 2019 at 8:12 AM Well done, Alexis brrrr (lol). Congratulations on your placement in my contest. hugs Charlie Alexis Y. February 11, 2019 at 11:31 AM Hi Charles, Thank you very much.You held a good contest. I never even heard of the form until you hosted the contest. I appreciate my placement in your contest.

Carolyn Devonshire February 11, 2019 at 6:22 AM Stopping back with congratulations on your win, Alexis! Hugs, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire January 30, 2019 at 1:21 PM Excellent imagery, Alexis. It's too cold for the ice to break in most of the U.S. now. Best wishes in the contest!

Jennifer Proxenos January 30, 2019 at 11:48 AM Hi Alexis, Cold stiff gave me cold shivers. Imagine if this was true, start of an excellent horror movie! Well chosen words which strung together give you your desired result - well penned Alexis and good luck! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich January 29, 2019 at 3:13 PM Oh you got a story out of yours. Nicely done! yes, I have a cat but also a dog. he is much more annoying than our cat but I miss the affectionate cat I had a long time ago. she was as friendly as a puppy dog!!

Paul Callus January 29, 2019 at 12:44 PM Stiffly chilly ... and many questions which so far have gone unanswered! gl in the contest, Alexis. Regards // paul

Bobby May January 28, 2019 at 5:07 PM I like this one and the other one but I would have pick this one well done Alexis! Alexis Y. January 28, 2019 at 5:32 PM Hi Bobby, I appreciate you saying that. Thanks for stopping by:-) Alexis

Jan Allison January 28, 2019 at 3:24 PM certainly is a chilling read alexis!:-) hugs jan xx Alexis Y. January 28, 2019 at 5:36 PM Hi Jan, I'm glad you stopped by. Thanks for your help earlier:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2019 at 1:26 PM - So this is "Than-Bauk" poem, I've never seen it before ... super written, Alexis - Best wishes for a win to you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Alexis Y. January 28, 2019 at 1:32 PM Hi Anne-Lise, I'm not that famliar with either. I just wanted to give it a go. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Michelle Faulkner January 28, 2019 at 1:20 PM Such captivating visuals, I think this will do well! Alexis Y. January 28, 2019 at 1:25 PM Hi Michelle, Thank you so much. I deleted the other one. I hope the sponsor feels the way that you do. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Tom Cunningham January 28, 2019 at 12:33 PM Gave me a chill reading it lol. Good luck. Tom. Alexis Y. January 28, 2019 at 1:33 PM Hi Tom, That's good right? I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Joseph May January 28, 2019 at 10:39 AM Very nicely done Alexis...GL in the contest..