Ice Particles Fall

Carolyn, What a beauty, I feel the coldness and sadness in this, wow:))

i've been there. in the rain. not stoping the tears. my darkest hour. john

Darn! I missed this, Carolyn! Fantastic imagery portrayed in this! I sent you an email as I thought we were down once more! lol I was so wrong..just some minor glitch, I guess. Love, Audrey

I'm inside right now, but reading this one is making me shiver. How you have captured such clear descriptiveness in these few words is amazing.

You used the 5-7-5 scheme and I was glad to see that. There was a blizzard the other day here and more snow coming tomorrow. "Sadness camouflaged by sleet". Intresting thought. I just had a poem come out in the "Voices Israel" antholgy. Look foward to seeing your book! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Beautiful Carolyn, should be a top winner, excellent images. Agape, Moses

excellent entry looks like a winner! Hope your warm and well. Light & Love

Carolyn, a great last line which makes for a stunning haiku ;-) good luck for the contest.. Love Wilma

A nice metaphorical one, Carolyn. Good luck in his contest! Luv, Andrea

Great write, wonderful last line. I enjoyed the read, good luck in the contest. Caryl

I'd never thought of it as "winter's frozen tears." Great line. Hope you had a wonderful holiday. Love, Dave

Carolyn, Exquisite! Hapy New Year and may all your wishes be fulfilled. Love, Will

very creative(: i would see why winter had frozen tears. . its so cold. ~Always&Forever Lynette

This poem came right(write) on time my dear ! Noah and I built our igloo for the year....I hope ! *smiles* Great Haiku Carolyn ! much love, james

Great Haiku, Carolyn! We here gots lots of snow and today it was snowing again. Prettey well done and best of luck for the contest! Love, Gert