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ice on my window

ice on my window
falling snow, falling eyelids
freezing makes me warm
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Jones Avatar
October 31, 2024 at 7:51 PM
Love the simple truth of this! Great haikus.
Sidwell Avatar
November 4, 2024 at 4:45 PM
Thank you Karen! I appreciate your comment!
Allison Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 9:43 AM
Excellent imagery I feel chilled reading your descriptive haiku:-) hugs jan xx (soupmail)
Sidwell Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 10:04 AM
Thanks, Jan! :)
Kendrick Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 10:02 AM
Whoa!! I am now wondering if you are okay or does the freezing outdoor temperature make you snuggle in your bed in a warm place. I enjoyed reading your post. Thank you for sharing. Sara K
Sidwell Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 10:49 AM
I often wonder if I’m okay :). Thanks for kind words and making me smile!
Schatz Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 1:33 AM
Nice haiku! I like "falling snow, falling eyelids" Welcome to Poetrysoup! I joined about five months ago, and have found it be wonderful group of people. Some of these folks are off the charts, amazing poets! Even so, I've never detected a shred of ego or haughtiness.
Sidwell Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 9:07 AM
Thank you and thanks for the welcome! I agree the talent here is incredible!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 1:23 PM
that's a really cool KU
Sidwell Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 9:07 AM
Thank you!
Empress Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 10:39 AM
Wintry and descriptive seasonal haiku this is: i love the flow of your words and how you’ve delivered this dear robert. “Freezing makes me warm” is a very deep metaphor and conveys so much, Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light always
Sidwell Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 10:44 AM
Heartfelt thanks! Your support is very appreciated!
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