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ice on my window falling snow, falling eyelids freezing makes me warm

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/11/2024 7:38:00 AM

wintry weather makes me sleeping...those falling eyelids happen--feel like I want to hibernate :-)

Robert Sidwell
Date: 2/11/2024 11:47:00 AM

Thanks for visiting and commenting Sara!

Jan Allison

Date: 2/9/2024 9:43:00 AM

Excellent imagery I feel chilled reading your descriptive haiku:-) hugs jan xx (soupmail)

Robert Sidwell
Date: 2/9/2024 10:04:00 AM

Thanks, Jan! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/3/2024 10:02:00 AM

Whoa!! I am now wondering if you are okay or does the freezing outdoor temperature make you snuggle in your bed in a warm place. I enjoyed reading your post. Thank you for sharing. Sara K

Robert Sidwell
Date: 2/3/2024 10:49:00 AM

I often wonder if I’m okay :). Thanks for kind words and making me smile!

Robert Schatz

Date: 1/31/2024 1:33:00 AM

Nice haiku! I like "falling snow, falling eyelids" Welcome to Poetrysoup! I joined about five months ago, and have found it be wonderful group of people. Some of these folks are off the charts, amazing poets! Even so, I've never detected a shred of ego or haughtiness.

Robert Sidwell
Date: 1/31/2024 9:07:00 AM

Thank you and thanks for the welcome! I agree the talent here is incredible!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2024 1:23:00 PM

that's a really cool KU

Robert Sidwell
Date: 1/31/2024 9:07:00 AM

Thank you!

Ink Empress

Date: 1/26/2024 10:39:00 AM

Wintry and descriptive seasonal haiku this is: i love the flow of your words and how you’ve delivered this dear robert. “Freezing makes me warm” is a very deep metaphor and conveys so much, Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light always

Robert Sidwell
Date: 1/26/2024 10:44:00 AM

Heartfelt thanks! Your support is very appreciated!