Ice Man

Born into this life steel around him cold floor under him old cloths on this back this this life is all he knew new things seemed a dream a dream soon turn to reality new things he had but changed he was humanity turned his back the agent of cold he had became steel in him hand stealing their dream as they did his.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/26/2024 10:52:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/24/2016 9:13:00 PM

njoroge muraya, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/3/2016 10:50:00 PM

NJOROGE, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**